Yesterday was 'story telling' and then 'story writing' day....My class have loved doing their work on stories in familiar settings. The sketching and painting of story boards has been particular popular - many children chose to write their story from their painted story board rather than their written planning and said that it was 'much easier this way because they could 'see' what to write...maybe a lesson to learn about how to help children write successfully?!
There has been a lot of good writing and meeting of individual writing targets, the story below is the best one. I was blown away by it. It's as the child wrote it, she's 7.
There has been a lot of good writing and meeting of individual writing targets, the story below is the best one. I was blown away by it. It's as the child wrote it, she's 7.
Trouble in the woods
One bright day a girl called Louise who was 8 years old decided that she would go into the wood even though she was warned not to because the eval trolls were there! She egored her mum completely. You see Louise's favourite animal was foxes and the best place to see a fox was in the wood. Louise had big green eyes and long black hair. So one sunny day after dinner she snuck out, put her fox suit on, said bye to her dog and off she went....
Louise was looking round a huge oak tree when she found a pound coin on the floor so she picked it up! But it was a trap because it flipped her up and a rope wrapped its self round her foot. Suddenly a two headed troll jumped down from a branch. It was hungry and danced around the trap singing, your going to be my dinner, my dinner, my dinner! He was wearing a bright pinck T-shirt and green shorts. His skin was brown and he had a flat nose as well.
Suddenly from out of the shadows came a fox. The fox pownsed on the troll and with one scrape of the paw he killed the troll. He un-tied the rope and took Louise back to her cottage in the middle of the woods. Her mum was furious but happy adn she was sent to bed without any tea.
The images below are made by Microsoft Auto-collage, it's all of their story boards and is the current desktop background in Year 3!
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